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I'll be marching alone

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Finally! I've spent an hour and a half on something! Congrats to me~ ^.^

Feedback very much appreciated *nudges Crystal*
Anything I could improve on, besides obvious things like the transition between that shirt and the skirt and the lack of legs?

I tried my best on the hands ;_; forgive me if they're off.

Original lyrics (first two verses):

Soldiers marching the battlefield

marching, marching home

Mothers march with long lost sons

but I’ll be marching alone


Once a family of four

now two, and two cards

One burning in the fireplace

and one delivered to my yard...

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Crystal-Mint

Crystal is here! XD

Well, if you want feedback...forgive me if I'm too harsh lol

First of all, one of the most obvious things here is the neck. It should probably be only half the length of the neck that you drew here. Sometimes you can exaggerate it a little, but right now it's just way too long XD


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You know what? Want me to just redline it? XD I'll send you the link after I finish doing it XD (btw, I'm not the best artist, so my changes might not be the most accurate, but it will at least show you where you could improve :D)

omg sorry I sound so arrogant and mean right now ;w;